"Which way do I take?", I wonder
Standing at cross-roads.
My mind is shadowed with images of failure,
And my heart with fear.
Unseen hands caressed me,
And made me feel, what I could not see.
Images of success filled my mind.
My heart filled with joy, which till then was hollow.
"Conquer you mind", a voice said, "And everything postive will follow".
PS: If anyone is to blame , its Leo. He is inficting me upon poetry. He was vowed to find the poet in me, so dear readers, bear with him. (And me ofcourse) :D
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- Priya Vinay
- The regular city chick, i talk a lot, have some wounds, not easily forgot. here i write, my many a thought, sarcastic n optimistic, i'm givin bloggin a shot... and wondering whether to finally grow up or not .. :)
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28 comments:
conquer your mind - its hard!
it is one of the thing which anyone can't control!
maximum we can do is to make it think positive all the time,which is too hard!
do you know that the first instantaneous thought that pops up in mind would be negative,no,I can't!and we try hard to make it yes and I can!try to observe.
hmm.. :) readers will love it.. its a very positive poem da!! :)
i'm gonna find that poetess.. i will :)
4 sriv...
True.. It is the hardest thing to do. Especially if u are an agmark pessimist like me :D
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4 Leo..
Rare positive poem :)
Thanks Leo..
i like the spirit of the poem!!
good job..
a worthy contribution.
somehow i feel we fail when we see r selves and the mind as diff entities.. coz when one says one thing the other will oppose..free
tht was pretty good.. be the optimist..
P.S: a slight modification..
"Which way do I take?", I wonder
nearing the cross-roads, i scooter
time is running out
i raise my right hand
the left indicator keeps on blinking
while i go straight crashing..
Hi Priya,
but i like it darling! keep on!!!
you have the gift, the talent, believe me! NURTURE IT!!!
have a nice day...!
i've bookmarked you, and do come visit my space when you have time...
:)
P.S.
I like your template, very nice and the choice of colors? yeah, green is my second fave color next to blue!!!
:)
Thanks for joining us. I too like the spirit of the poem.
4 shraddha...
Thank you :)
4 Sue...
Thank you! and Thanks to Leo for convincing me to write it.
4 soin...
True. Inner conflicts always lead to disastrous results. :)
Precisely why I dont use my mind much!!!
:)
PS: I'm dying to ask. Adhu yenna .. free???
4 Vish...
Thank you..
As for your modification, it beats te original hands down!!!!!!
:D Loved it..
:)
:)
4 Amity...
Thank you so much Amity.. :) Glad you liked it...
And thank you so much for the follow :)
4 Sandy...
Thankyou :) :)
appadiya.. it is joke which u mite hav come across.. jus modified the ending and put a lil mokkai.. glad u liked it..
loved the mantra !! :)
ur the 3445738994th person to ask this..so read this..http://vishvaksaen.blogspot.com/2009/04/philosophy-of-free.html ...free
4 PS:
Thank you :)
4 soin..
wow keeping count.. or made up figure???
In my life right now, I have to consciously remember your words. My life is at such a huge crossroads now . . . exciting and scary. Poetry is a powerful expression at times like this.
Ah, very nice wisdom's words.
4 andree.
Thanks for the read :)
Hope you chose the best path :)
4 TumbleWords...
Thank you so much... :)
so fun that you have a friend inspiring the poet in you. Lovely piece.
4 tammie Lee...
Yes it is fun :)
Thank you so much :)
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