I started going on early morning walks [from today :)], accompanied by an extremely nosy and gossip mongering neighbour. The girl just has to rant about who wore what and did what and said what every second of a conversation [ which usually is a monologue if I'm on the other end ].
I did not know anyother way to keep her quiet, so I put on my headphones and she got the message :D
I was also planning on crash dieting, when my guruji effectively scared me that I will put on double the weight I lose after I quit the diet. (:O), so I made sure I ate properly today.
Classes cancelled again!! No surprises there.
My grandma's brother fell down and I was posted on look-after duty at her place the whole day...
I had a chance to browse my old writings.. And I hit upon my favorite one...
The Fates....
Where goes a slain hero and why?
The former answer is available not.
The answer to the latter.......
Fates rule life....
God has given us no choices,
"Given our choice we would raise our voices", says a soul.
"Against god?", is what I ask.
Getting an answer is a mammoth task.
Says the same soul - "There is no end to the misery that God giveth.
Given a choice , I would choose happiness to get."
Asks the soul -
"When will sadness end? When will the rules be bent?"
Acceptance is the way ,
But who listens to this say...
To all this and more, I am immune..
To this tapestry of life, I have been sewn.
No one escapes the Fates...
Happiness is but a bait -
Thrown by God , for accepting life and its ways...
"When will the book of Fates be shut?", The soul questions.
I reply... when the threads of the tapestry will be cut.....
PS: I end abruptly, for the lack anything else to say. :) Do rate the poem :)
10 comments:
a slain hero goes to heaven i think...
coz heroes die doing somethin good...
on the other hand, if there has been more evil than good in his life, then.. he might go to hell also...
life is sewn different for different ppl..
depending on the sewing, the thread can be cut :)
i rate it good.. can be better though, and i know Pri can do it better too :)
a slain hero just slips out of it all.. hope u know that slip out of the black song from fort minor.. makes sense here..free
4 leo..
Thanks dude :)
4 soin..
slip out the back u mean.. :)
yeah..
"Even heroes know when to be scared"
:)
:)
mudiyala@ fort minor..
my next post may make a lil sense abt the second part of ur poem.. wen did u exactly write this??
the poem was good, though i hav some differnce in opinion abt the ideas presented in it ;)
i think we hav to power to choose our own paths.. :P
well written :)
4 vish...
I wrote it in 9th grade. Beginning of mt goth years... :)
:)
4 Amal...
I agree with you.. We do have the power to choose our path.. I was too young to realise it then :) :)
Getting an answer indeed is a mammoth of a task! No wonder!..yu wrote this in 9th grade! wowee!..first time here i guess. cya around mate :D
4 Hary...
welcome :) and
Thanks for the read :)
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