Your silence speaks to me more than your words...
the pauses are not awkward, but moments of deep understanding...
Is this silence going to rule.. or will there be a time
When i get to hear what my heart longs for...
The sound that keeps my spirits alive..
the waves that give me the strength to go on...
Remember , that every time you are silent , the absence of the vibrations,
is pulling at my life strings....
Speak.. for it keeps me alive....
Give me an answer, why is it to you my heart is glued?
Speak.. why is it only me you elude?
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- Priya Vinay
- The regular city chick, i talk a lot, have some wounds, not easily forgot. here i write, my many a thought, sarcastic n optimistic, i'm givin bloggin a shot... and wondering whether to finally grow up or not .. :)
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28 comments:
This was beautiful...silence can be deafening when you are longing for sound.
Nice one dear :) i too agree with u..sometimes words from loved ones means a lot:)
somehow silence doesnt do well with me..coz u can always misunderstand..just speak it out and make it clear..and y is it glued to him?? thats coz he eludes u..wonder if the longing will be the same when the eluding part is gone..free
yes indeed.. the flow in ur poem was so beautiful Pri :) lovely thoughts!
nice rhyme too! silence is deafening when u want words!
Great depth here.
great flow
sometimes its hard to accept silence
Interesting take on the prompt. Very powerful.
love, Melanie
very well written Pri..:)
yes, that's true, silence kills our emotions, hurts us so deeply, cuts like a knife...:)
but when words are spoken, we are relieved and will make us happy...:)
good morning my dear...:)
Thoughts full of introspection and desire. Very well done. I can relate to this with my own experiences. Perhaps she will speak, and all will be right again.
Silence is very elusive, also drives me mad sometimes, but I still love it. This is deep indeed!
I can relate to this one. Nothing worse than not knowing what is going on....
Nicely layered. Silence is often uncomfortable, I think.
Amazing !!!!!!!! Loved your profile picture :)
4 soin...
true, the longng is there because he eludes. It wont be the same without it. good point :)
4 sweetest, snow, Leo, anthony, floreta, melanie, amity, Loch, Amias, Sandy, Tumblewords & cursed...
Thank you all so much :)
//Give me an answer, why is it to you my heart is glued?
Speak.. why is it only me you elude?//
nice rhyme :) first time here..heavy dooty stuff :) enakenamo tamizhla ezhuthina paata translate panna mathiri iruku :) sooper attempt
4 gils...
Thanks for the read.. yedhavadhu traslation pannirtha i would've mentioned the original... :) :)
originala think panna vida maatingalae!!!!
This one made me think how easy it is to interject our own thoughts and feelings into that void where the silence is. All that waiting tugs at our patience as we wait to know, hoping it matches what we would like to see there, in that empty space. Very nice.
powerful work..great job..
4 jukota...
True... But when we hope for something too uch, it always works out the oposite way..
:)
4 shraddha...
Thank you so much :)
how is it that u gave such wonderful posts when i was off the blogosphere.. maybe i shd not visit ur blog at all and then come every week and read al the posts n comment..
great piece.. i think am gonna show this poem to a frnd of mine.. soin might know who that is..
4 vish...
welcome back dude.. was wondering where u'd disappeared to :)
from next week i will be blogging only once a week :) :)
beautiful expressions :)
4 PS...
thank you :)
oh yes, that deep silence that makes one lean in and wonder. It sure can be torturous. Wonderful pondering in this piece.
Spirithelpers
4 tommy.
thank you :)
lovely :)
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