A soft whisper stirred my nice reverie.
"Come, look out the window and see"
Welcomed, by soft kisses of the breeze,
I watched happily, the swaying of trees.
"Look up", came the soft whisper again,
Pearlish moon was smiling for me to see,
Many stars twinkling above like a crown,
A silent melody played softly just for me.
It gave me hope, took away all my fears,
It lightened the pain I had all these years.
"I've missed so much, of beauty in life"
I let go of past. joined the moonlight jive.
PS: Childish as it may sound.. I felt extremely good writing it :)
PPS: Belated thanks (:P) to HaRy for the follow :)
10 comments:
this is very lovely Pri :) good one!
thanks leo...
apo kaka pi vizhaliya.. anyways in that mood listen to ilayaraja's -how to name it... or sivamani's-mahaleela..bliss..free
night time la kaka ella thoongadhu????
its nice dear :) loved it :)
thnx snow :)
even i think of writing a kavidhai like this...kadaisila...mokai varthaigal than varuthu...! anyways ..ore silent melodies ah:D...rite rite... good! thanks yelam neeye vechiko,cya around
peterla mokkai pota adhu than kavidhai....
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beautiful poem, er kinda reminiscent of star gazing, happy past!
nice read Priya!
so mothathula vanathula irukara idlya pathi oru poem.. wat abt chutney.. racist..
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