You made me happy, you made me glow.
You were more than a friend to me.
I knew deep down,
For the rest of my life, it was with you I wanted to be.
Into the starry nights, with you I gazed.
You made me glitter, you made me sway.
The ground gave away and I fell,
In loneliness, I now dwell.
Why?
Please tell me why, to her,
I had to give you away.
Will the void be ever filled?
Will I get an answer for every tear I have spilled?
5 comments:
ooh... this is sad re...
who is it that u gave away? :(
perhaps the void can be filled..
answers can be got too.
it may be possible!! :)
eternally single.. sigh!! what more can I say? it must be the aliens...
:) :)
stumbled onto here from ur comments in soin n srivats's blog.. like ur template.. comin to ur post.. it was good.. jus a suggestion.. either dont give the first 2 lines or give them at the last.. who wants to read the poem if u bring it to a nutshell at the start..
n death metal?? care to clarify??
4 vish!
thank you for reading :)
thanks for the suggestion :)
change done :)
i'll skip the death metal part for now :) :)
been there witnessed such things happening :)
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